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Confessions - 9 : A proposal..


You just wont believe that I will stay, that I will be there. You just wont believe that our commitment towards each other is nothing less than any "in-love" couple. So to make you understand what you are for me. I would like to get down on one knee and say this.

"The first time we met, I thought you are snob. Thinks so mighty of oneself that we are all not noticeable. But then you smiled at me. That sweet smile made me just levitate towards you. I had no choice but to become attached to you, that is your magnetism. So today I propose to love you, care for you till time turns grey. I will be brutally honest with you and lie to appease you as the time chooses. I will always protect you, always save you from unsavory encounters and people. I will be extremely loyal to you even when we are not together. I will love you even when I hate you and will always leave a way to come back to each other. When you find your love, I will fight the world with you and support you. But if that person is not worthy, then I will fight with you to save you. I want to spend my old days with you by my side, passing snide comments on passersby and just merry in our senility. If I lose my mind before you do I will give all the rights to you to decide about me. Its you I want by my side when Apocalypse strikes. And its you I need when I am so sad that I cant get up. So my dear, today I propose to be your friend for life. Will you be my best friend ??"   

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  1. Srikanth Manjunath28 January 2016 at 08:14

    first thing first...extra ordinary bundle of vocabulary.. words oozes from your like a spring.

    Second thing...lovely way of proposing...just like the song in qurbani "marne waala koi zindagi chaahtaaha ho jaise...hum tume chaahta hai aise"...

    Beautifully filled with fragrance of love, affection, emotion... and above all a great sense of friendship.

    Super nivi..i liked it.

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  2. bilimugilu28 January 2016 at 08:28

    "I will love you even when I hate you and will always leave a way to come back to each other". Not easy for everyone to say and follow this :) Sounds filmy though, a thought of this principle itself is so awakening. Loved it Nivs :)

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  3. Naveen Gowda28 January 2016 at 09:46

    Wow, a perfect way to start any relationship and believe me, the words are awesomely expressed and very inspiring. Lucky would be the person on d other end. As the above comment said, those lines are hard, but still very worthy for any relationship :)

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